THE BEDROOM OF MY DREAMS
I'm Aina, my perfect bedroom is under the sea. It's white and there are big windows, and a big balcony. I have a big TV and a big bed. My bedroom is very beawtifule, because you can see all the animals of the see. My bedroom has got a chair and a table. This is my bedroom of my dreams. ⟰⟰
Hi Aina, the description of your bedroom should be longer and you need to include prepositions and use AND, BUT and OR. remember also to divide the text into paragraphs.
ReplyDeleteHowever, it's an amazing bedroom!